This is the result of taking last night’s comments back to the drawing board. Re-cropped, flipped, and tuned up a little.
What I like about it is
- The simpler image with the up-to-the-right S-curve rocks makes it more clear what I want the viewer to see.
- Dave, I think the stick is put to decent use in this version
What I am not keen about
- River flowing to the left, against the flow of the S-curve seems off
This is the version you saw last night
